Monday, May 6, 2013

Spring Critique

(Copy this organizer to take notes)
Art Vocabulary and Craftsmanship
Describe the technique applied – also describe dodging and burning; depth of field, etc.

Uses a short depth of field. The azaleas are burned in well, but I should have burned the bench and smaller flowers in more. The edges are bright and distract from the center of interest.

Elements
·          Color
·          Line
·          Shape
·          Texture
·          Form
·          Value
·          Space
Analyze: specifically comment on any elements and principles used in your work.

The repeating shape of the azaleas contrast with the repeating shapes of the smaller flowers. The smooth texture of the flowers contrasts  with the rough texture of the bench. The stems on the small flowers lead the eye to the azaleas. The harsh line of the back of the bench is distracting, I wish I had moved the camera a little lower to eliminate it. The bigger proportion of the azaleas gives a better sense of how small the little flowers are. The  picture is heavily balanced on the bottom half. The two different kinds of flowers add variety to the image.
Principles
·          Proportion
·          Variety
·          Balance
·          Contrast
·          Pattern/Repetition
·          Rhythm/Movement
·          Unity/Harmony
·          Emphasis
Conceptual Skill
Interpret: What is the photographer’s intent?  Does it convey an idea or message? Is there a mood?
I wanted to arrange the flowers in a way that would show the different textures and sizes between them. Adding the small flower in with the azaleas gave a better sense of the differences.

Critique

Judge: evaluate the success of this piece.

I think I was able to capture the differences fairly well. I wish the small flower in front  of the azaleas didn't intersect with them.



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